st patrick

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

one day there was a man could patrick and he lived in Ireland.He hated school but he loved the beach. one day he skiped school and went to the beach but then a big sadow came up be hind him and he froze there was a pirate ship that had must of swooped into the cove the pirates jamped off board and they graded every young little girl and boy they took the little boys and little girls and took them on to there creaking ship and they took patrick too. when they reached lreland the captives we were sold at a marketplace .